WALT use powerful word's

The dremingworld Once upon a time there lived a beautiful girl her name was jenny.She had dark hair and shiny eye.One day she dreaming that she had a chocolate house and a golden table . And the river was milk. And candy door and window. Tree’s wore pouring juice. Instead of people there wore candy people. And best of all she found a treasure box. Problem An ogre tried to scare the little girl. And then eat the little girl. But the girl went quickly into the hall.And the ogre was sad.The girl didn't know that the ogre was watching her.But when she came back and looked and she screamed