WALT use powerful words in our story

The girl went to sleep.She was dreaming that she was on the most dangerous slide in the whole universe suddenly someone from her back pushed her down . She twirled,spun,swayed,swirled and flipped.She brooded!! she yelled!!.But! There was no one there for her to help her.suddenly she went round and round like a ball.She held on tight she closed her eyes and scarm!! Ads loud as she could she wished it stopped but! it never did.She shouted mommy!!!!! As loud as she could.Finally she felt a warm bright light.She was on her last slide it was a 1 kilometer long.She suddenly went down in the sea she woke up