Wednesday, 21 September 2016

WALT wire with detail

Once there was a man named Bob.Bob was going on a trip he was going on a high  rope.Bob  was nervous.He was going tomorrow wit his friend his friend name is Freed .Freed was nervous to he was sweating. It  was night they where asleep they couldn't wait.Bob said "I can't wait to go up there" Bob said again "I might even see my house" .Bob said "see you up there" freed said  "race you up there"


He was to excited he held  on to the rope.Suddenly the rope snapped like a bird snapped it.He said "I will die" He closed his eyes pretending to die .


Suddenly an eagle came and saved him.The eagle slowly put him on the ground and fly away .Freed was so happy that he wasn't died

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