I am a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in LS1 and my teachers are Mr Wong and Mr Ogilvie
Thursday, 17 May 2018
ten sentence Explanation
LI:To write a ten sentence Explanation. This week for writing we had to write a ten sentence explanation. We did this because so we could learned how to write a proper explanation. We used a template.
Hello Mojtaba.
ReplyDeleteYour introduction starts well, talking about aluminium cans being made. Have you told the reader what you will be explaining?
Have you separated your steps into their own paragraphs?