Thursday 15 September 2016

walking

It was a glorious morning."wake up kids it is a school day"said Dad.The three girls were sleepy and tired .They had wit bix  for breakfast. They were all most late.School starts at 9 pm. Unlikely they didn't  have a car!Dad  walked with them only half way to school.The rest they had to walk by there self.They were  twirling on the way to school.  They went through a tunnel.It was pitch black. But they weren't scared they were holding bands.Then they reached school Then it was 3 am.At 3 am school finishes.They were playing in the park  wale Watling for for dad to pick them up.


The girls weren't smart. There was a man who made him self like there dad. He was a kidnapper."I will get those girl and take them in the desert Ha!Ha!Ha!Ha!".He came to the girls.Lets go home. The girls believed him.When  they went to the car the girls said"I thought you didn't have a car.The kidnapper said "will when you were at school I buy one.The girls went in the car .They went   past there house the girls hay dad there is our house . The kidnapper said " we are going on a fill trip.The kidnapper lift them there and went away.


The dad came to school he he was looking for his kids.But no one was there. the kidnapper called the dad.And said "I have your kids give ,me 10,000 dolour.The dad was smart he said "I will give you 10,000 dolours come to my house.The kidnapper was dam he belied him.He got the kids and raced like a racing car to his house .But in the mean time the dad called the police .When the kidnapper comes to his house the police will caper him.The kidnapper went to jeal. The girls lived happy ever after.

1 comment:

  1. i like your writing because you did three pages

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