Haunted house

LI: To plan and write narratives quickly.

I learned to write in 40 minutes and plan for 5 minutes   because when we take a test that is how much time we have to write a narrative test. I learned it first by  using a story organiser. First we wrote a narrative in 4 weeks that was just our practice then we started to write stories in 40 minutes about pictures.  In our narrative text we had to have a simple sentence, compound sentence, and a complex sentence and a simile in it.

Here is my story
Matthew, Mojtaba and Aung Naing were 10 years old.They lived in a town named Fun. It was halloween. They each got a costume. Matthew wore a Hulk costume, Mojtaba wore an alien costume, and Aung Naing wore a Naruto costume.They were living very close to each other.One night they saw a haunted house. Matthew said, "who volunteers to discover what is inside of that haunted house?" Mojtaba and Aung Naing responded, " We do!"Mathew said, "Let's go and discover what is inside tomorrow night OK". The tomorrow night they all came to the same place they was before.They knocked on the door the door magically opened they all said "WOW!!!!!!!".Minutes later they were walking then they bumped into a Ghost Matthew shouted" Ruuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!".They Run as fast as a cheetah.They were in a the corridor Aung Naing said "let's get out of here" But they couldn't find there way out. Throw the corridors they saw lot's of picture of old people Mojtaba suggested that those people were the president. They also saw a picture of a kind of gun they all said "That is the key of destroying the ghost" Matthew said "How do we find it " Aung naing responded "it is in a room inside this house.They found two rooms which on is it in. They choose door number one they saw a chest with three gun's that looks the same as the picture they saw.They took one each they hided until the ghost when the ghost was in they shot him . And then saw a door that said exit they ran as fast as they could run out of the house they all went home sad because they had no candy.they told their brothers and sister the story.