narrative events

L.I to write  a narrative sequence of event

I first learned with my group what a complex sentence is a complex sentence is a simple sentence and then you add a coma then you say a little like what is going on. Once we had learned what a complex sentence is we had to add 2 complex sentences in our events.I Learned it by knowing what an event has in it.

EVENT

Mum dived into the water to catch some fish It was easy for mum

because she was good and there was lots of fish in the ocean.

Mum caught some fish and put the

fish on the smooth surfaces then she saw baby in the air and

thought that baby jumped off on purpose but baby was blown

off the cliff .

Baby was not

aiming  for the jagged ice he was aiming for the water but

unlucky  he fell on the jagged ice then he fell unconscious.

Mum came out of the water and shouted at  the jagged ice,while

she was breaking the jagged ice.